Zero draft

1. exaggerate
2. talk about an object like if it is human
3. use detail and punctuation

Example: as i touched the sharp edges of the tin. i feel the tip of my index finger leak with blood. somehow bleeding more then enough. i take my revenge by sticking a device in its head twisting it. turning it until the shell of his skull is ripped off from the rest of its body. as my revenge continues i decide to go further and rip out its origins. i put them in my mouth using a object perfectly curved but not good enough to stop the vital fluid drip from my mouth.